diff --git a/trailer.html b/trailer.html index 4627b6f..b496e76 100644 --- a/trailer.html +++ b/trailer.html @@ -1592,8 +1592,15 @@ else if (s.drawing) tools = 'drawing…'; else if (stillFilming(s)) tools = 'filming…'; else if (EDITING === s.id) { + // An EMPTY box: this is guidance for the writer - what should happen, + // how the camera moves, what is said - and it applies the same whether + // the shot is spoken or silent. Everything not mentioned is kept. The + // last request is shown, not pre-filled, so it is not mistaken for the + // thing to change. tools = '
' + + 'What should change in this shot? Direction, camera, what is done, or what is said - the writer keeps everything you do not mention.' + + '">' + + (s.rough ? '
Last time you asked for: ' + esc(String(s.rough).slice(0, 240)) + '
' : '') + '
' + '
';