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Screenplay ch.1: remove the invented DMV-notice insert

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@ -72,8 +72,6 @@ Nothing from him. She knows better than to push.
KAREN (CONT'D) KAREN (CONT'D)
We miss you too, Dad. We miss you too, Dad.
On the refrigerator behind her, a Florida DMV renewal notice addressed to her father, clipped under a magnet. Her eyes go to it. She decides against it.
KAREN (CONT'D) KAREN (CONT'D)
Well, just think about it for now, Dad. I'll call you later in the week. Why don't you call one of your friends and play golf, or something. It may do you good, and take your mind off of Mom for a few hours. Well, just think about it for now, Dad. I'll call you later in the week. Why don't you call one of your friends and play golf, or something. It may do you good, and take your mind off of Mom for a few hours.